I like the animal zoo theme and the drawing style is very appropriate for children. Why not these animals have the same series of background? Is there anyway to make each animals more connective?...
The layout of your proposal look a lot better. Much cleaner. One suggestion I do have is to make your type choices small and to expand the leading a little bit. Right now, it looks little squished.
Your sketches are really playful and vibrant. I agree with Cui that their should be some consistency in how the animals are shown. I also think you should develop a title that speaks more to the fun spirit of your project, something more catchy like "Zoo Friends"...
I agree that you should maybe focus on nailing down one style in order to really strengthen the consistency. I'd love to see sketches of the other components of your project as well! Looking good.
Nice proposal design! I appreciate your effort of organizing the information. The sketches look fine as they are just baby steps to the final outcome, but I recommend making a big picture/layout sketch. Also once you choose your illustrative style for the animals, it'd be helpful for us to understand your progression better. Nicely done so far!
I like the animal zoo theme and the drawing style is very appropriate for children. Why not these animals have the same series of background? Is there anyway to make each animals more connective?...
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ReplyDeleteThe layout of your proposal look a lot better. Much cleaner. One suggestion I do have is to make your type choices small and to expand the leading a little bit. Right now, it looks little squished.
ReplyDeleteYour sketches are really playful and vibrant. I agree with Cui that their should be some consistency in how the animals are shown. I also think you should develop a title that speaks more to the fun spirit of your project, something more catchy like "Zoo Friends"...
ReplyDeleteI agree that you should maybe focus on nailing down one style in order to really strengthen the consistency. I'd love to see sketches of the other components of your project as well! Looking good.
ReplyDeleteNice proposal design! I appreciate your effort of organizing the information. The sketches look fine as they are just baby steps to the final outcome, but I recommend making a big picture/layout sketch. Also once you choose your illustrative style for the animals, it'd be helpful for us to understand your progression better. Nicely done so far!
ReplyDeleteyour illustrations are coming along nicely and the style is becoming more consistent across the board.
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