Last week in our small group we had talked about some changes in the background designs in your proposal itself and I think those tweaks were done well. As for your progress in your sketches are amazing. The digital illustrations still lack a little detail, but are definitely headed in the right direction and continue to get closer. The close ups of the hand done drawings are great.
I really wish that I could illustrate as well as you can! I think that your progress is awesome and you really updated your proposal and it looks great! I think you can make your headers even smaller on your proposal and I'm not super into hyphenating text, personally, so I would take a second look at that. Really really really looking forward to more sketches!
Your drawings are simply amazing! I am very jealous of your ability to draw. I am really looking forward to seeing your final project. One thing I want to note is that your body copy still seems a little to big. I would try making it a size or two smaller.
I think your updated proposal showcases the spirit of your project much better. "Technical" is spelled wrong in one of your headings so you might want to correct that. Overall, I admire your illustration skills and your ability to clearly convey your ideas and progress.
I really like the brush drawing, it is very stylish and easy to recognize that is korean style. I was wondering know how the color match together~
ReplyDeleteLast week in our small group we had talked about some changes in the background designs in your proposal itself and I think those tweaks were done well. As for your progress in your sketches are amazing. The digital illustrations still lack a little detail, but are definitely headed in the right direction and continue to get closer. The close ups of the hand done drawings are great.
ReplyDeleteI really wish that I could illustrate as well as you can! I think that your progress is awesome and you really updated your proposal and it looks great! I think you can make your headers even smaller on your proposal and I'm not super into hyphenating text, personally, so I would take a second look at that. Really really really looking forward to more sketches!
ReplyDeleteYour drawings are simply amazing! I am very jealous of your ability to draw. I am really looking forward to seeing your final project. One thing I want to note is that your body copy still seems a little to big. I would try making it a size or two smaller.
ReplyDeleteI think your updated proposal showcases the spirit of your project much better. "Technical" is spelled wrong in one of your headings so you might want to correct that. Overall, I admire your illustration skills and your ability to clearly convey your ideas and progress.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing thus far. I really get inspired to further my work when I read over your proposal. Awesome job.
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